Thursday, January 31, 2013
Academic Language Written Assessment Week 21 1/31
Performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids, should not be allowed in sports. For example, it gives them an extra boost of energy which people that do not take drugs do not get. In addition, it is unfair to the people that work very hart to get to the point where they are now. Also, it is very bad for your health, you can develop health issues and become accustom to heavy mood swings and cases of roidrage. In conclusion, steroids should not be allowed in sport because they are unfair and dangerous.
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Whoops! It looks like you overlooked our vocabulary words: period, tradition, and primary. In the future, work on following the sophomore format of including at least two chunks in each paragraph. Keep working!
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