Thursday, February 7, 2013

Title your post: JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 22

Felons should be allowed to vote. For example, they should be allowed to vote because they have a right to voice their opinion.This shows that they could contribute to the city on the up-coming topics they are getting brought up to the people.This also shows that it helps when each and every person of the city votes for what they want changed in the city.In addition, they should be allowed to vote on things that help others in their same situation.This shows that things can actually get done if every one puts in the effort to change they city.This also shows that one day things can be like the people want if they dont give up on what thier fighting for.In conclusion, felons should be allowed to vote because every vote counts and they could have some good feedback on what should happen in the city.

1 comment:

  1. You have some good thinking demonstrated in the commentary. I want you to work on adding more factual ideas into your concrete details to strengthen your arguments. Also, remember to add the words.

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