Thursday, September 29, 2011

Academic Language Practice Paragaph 6

Undocumented immigrants should be given citizenship because they are human beings just like ourselves. They should be giving the opportunity to get a good job here so they can support their family with the things they need. Every one should be treated equally no matter what race they are and should be giving the chance for a better life not in poverty. It will help further education in children so they can succeed and be the next big thing in advanced technology or in the medical field. Undocumented immigrants should be granted citizenship so everyone can be have a chance at a better life.

1 comment:

  1. Oh! I hope you remembered to use the words in today's written assessment.

    By the way, your paragraph is very compassionate.

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