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Dear ms. Jones, Im sorry for steeling your poketbook ten years ago it was really wrong of me and i dident want too but I wanted some shoes. Right now i am working at an auto shop working on cars and i really am having a lot of fun. Im also going to Motercycle Mechanics Instatute and getting a degree in mechanis. Im glad im accually doing something with my life instead of stealing to get what i wanted all i have to do now is wait for my paycheck. Im sorry for what i did to you ten years ago it was wrong of me too do but u tought me a great lesson on working hard to get want i wanted. Thank you ms. Jones.
Sincerly, Roger.
I am sure Mrs. Jones accepts your apology. LOL anyways, you did a good job on your letter.
ReplyDeleteGood job on your post just make sure to capitalize the I and spelling other than that great job.
ReplyDeleteDear Roger,
ReplyDeleteThank you for the apology. I am happy to hear that you are working to become an auto mechanic. I hope you remember to wash your face. Ha! Ha!
-Ms. Luella Bates Washington Jones
(Please edit your work before posting it. Have an upperclassman or an adult spell check your paragraph.)
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